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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: Over a month without an update and without notice to your readers of going on hiatus... That is NOT Stable Updates. You also weren't the most stable B4 that hiatus either, I suggest coming up with a schedule that you can stick to, even if it's slower than you write, and just sticking with that schedule. <Chapter 2> "She holds 30 early bird tickets. She has one of those tickets." feels like there is a typo, try to fix this plz. The MC & Plot are a little predictable, try to go against the grain more. I not the assumption that this novel is happening in out own world... but is it a parallel universe to our own, a different time line... happening in real time... or what? Positive Feedback: (Predictable but) Strong plot & Character Development, Well written novel. Pacing is excellent. Personal Feedback: I may have a lot of constructive criticism, but I still really enjoined the plot thus far, I WILL keep reading at a later date. Keep up the good work.;,;. Score: WQ 5/5 SoU 3/5 SD 4/5 CD 4/5 WB 4/5

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Throne for The Next Idol Queen

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