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Pervert_In_Net
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ignore the classification, it does not reflect what I really think of the story. the story for me was very good, until chapter 22 where the author decided to send the MC to HOTD! in this story the MC can basically be counted as a ghost of the story. He is immortal and very OP to the naruto world, he has the lineage of uchiha, senju, uzumaki and yuki (Kiri ice user). it grows and with its system it becomes very strong in a short time. as time goes by, the MC becomes a man who roams the world and occasionally interferes with one thing or another, mainly training some characters, like he trained madara, hashirama, tobirama, myth and sarutobi (although he trained sarutobi for just a week) . Mc basically watches the history of the world without interfering too much, it may seem that he is trying to follow the canon, but this is not the case considering that he ensured that the ties between hashirama and madara do not break and they do not fight. during his adolescence he met a girl who fell in love and almost married, but she was killed during a trap they fell into, from there he never fell in love with another woman for almost 100 years, taking into account that he interfered in the fight tsunade, jiraya and orochimaru against hanzo. and then, after saving the three from hanzo, he is sent to the world of HOTD and then goes back to being a horny teenager as soon as he meets Saeko! seriously, it made it look like he didn't live more than 100 years (taking into account his past life). it was such a big break in the mood that I don't even know if I want to continue reading more, it was supposed to be a naruto fanfic, not a multiverse!

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in the world of Naruto ... (a few years before?)

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DragonGod999x
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I agree with you bro he made it a tragedy drama sh*t fanfic the oc lover is enough for him but the author killed her for what? just to make his fanfic a sh*t*ss the early chapters are ok thinking that he is op but when he got ambushed and his lover died the author didn't know what kind of story he is writing and what type of mc he is developing, and that bullsh*t with the shinigame like wtf it was only hours that his lover is killed and he can't resurrect her? like wtf nagato is more op than this mc cause nagato revived the whole konoha while the mc here can't even revive his only 1 lover. I intensively read the next chapters hoping that there is a way to resurrect his lover and I past by the chapter where black zetsu killed his parents yhat blew me up and decided to just drop this sh*t you'll only get high blood reading this sh*t*ss fanfic on making the mc weak and cannot do anything to save his loved ones even though he is op from his bloodline and chakra. sh*tty author

StrikingWave
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Wow dude!! Are you crazy to read until the chapter 22??!! I dropped in chapter 14!!

StrikingWave
StrikingWaveLv3StrikingWave

Yeah, shitty author.

DragonGod999x:I agree with you bro he made it a tragedy drama sh*t fanfic the oc lover is enough for him but the author killed her for what? just to make his fanfic a sh*t*ss the early chapters are ok thinking that he is op but when he got ambushed and his lover died the author didn't know what kind of story he is writing and what type of mc he is developing, and that bullsh*t with the shinigame like wtf it was only hours that his lover is killed and he can't resurrect her? like wtf nagato is more op than this mc cause nagato revived the whole konoha while the mc here can't even revive his only 1 lover. I intensively read the next chapters hoping that there is a way to resurrect his lover and I past by the chapter where black zetsu killed his parents yhat blew me up and decided to just drop this sh*t you'll only get high blood reading this sh*t*ss fanfic on making the mc weak and cannot do anything to save his loved ones even though he is op from his bloodline and chakra. sh*tty author