I am sorry, your story is interesting, but grammar is poor. Try a free version of grammarly or google translate your language to english. I hope u improve instead of not doing anything to it.
Alezero
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LIKEWell after google translate. You can use grammarly. Or if can try not fit the whole chapter in google translate. It will be not so accurate. Try putting in by 1 paragraph 1 by 1.
Alezero:Is a google traductor el que estoy utilizando, y ya prove 5 paginas para arreglar la gramática y me dicen que esta bien escrito, no se que mas hacer