Review Detail of Jackofall in in the world of Naruto ... (a few years before?)
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The story is pretty good. I dont mean any offence by this but it doesnt look like english is the authors first language, he/she needs to get a editor to edit the grammar. The book is kind of hard to read because it doesnt look like it is written well but the overall story is good, from what i could understand.
in the world of Naruto ... (a few years before?)
Alezero
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I think many people will write in comments where the mistake is being made. Just look through them and try not to make same mistake again. For eg : You use "him" instead of "her" for Kureja many times.
Alezero:sorry, dont write inglish, and speak... sorry, sorry
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Jackofall:The translation is getting better, or i am just adapting to the authors writing.
