I wish it was a longer length story. Also, the ML needed a bit more personality, he was a bit bland. The ending chapters were rushed and seemed more like chapter summaries. If this is rewritten again then I would read it since it was good.

I noticed this only need one more reviews before it can have a rating so why not. I means, this is a good Apocalypse story. So here, the 10th reviews from me.

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