Review Detail of DeJeL in Rogue Immortal: Immortal Rise From The Coffin, Back To Zero.

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: Chapter length is too small, you even said your chapters were roughly 800 words, while small is normally 1K words and large is normally 2.5K words, so your's are definitely too small... also, to practically release ALL your novel in one go is not a stable release rate, I would have suggested just uploading one chapter a day (place them on a timed release if nothing else) and when you decided to stop writing, add that to the list of To Be Released chapters and have it posted the same day as the last chapter would have been posted, that way if you changed your mind B4 it was posted, you could have continued... and if not, then you at-least gave them a stable release rate while it lasted.;,;. Now for a more personal CC: I suggest you don't stop writing for the people, because I always suggest writing for yourself, not for others, so you should not allow others to stop you from writing either. Positive Feedback: When reading the first 5 chapter shorts, I actually felt like I read at-least 4 chapters, and that's hard to do with chapters that are about 1/2 a chapter each.;,;. Personal Feedback: Even if you had continued your story, I would not have... sorry it's just not my cup of tea... I do suggest you give your readers another chance and try to continue your story tho.;,;. Score: WQ 4/5 SoU 4/5 SD 5/5 CD 5/5 WB 5/5