Thanks author for the effort. Appreciate it as this is your first work. It’s an interesting read. Here are my comments 1. John’s charater setup how he was hit and then revived into a family raised by Sophia and the whole system introduction came it - that was neat 2. initially when i read about John, Peter the chuches and the 3 groupings that lived including the beast - somehow i thought it was related to the book of john, peter as in the bible and how fishes n loaves of bread gets multiplied - haha. Good to read John’s characther on thinking about the family n how he could help his mother multiply thier supplies n money. 3. The two mission - look foward to see the climax of the plot and the end game from John what is he trying to achieve with his gift / talent. Keep up the effort!
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naisu! thank you thank you for the feedback! I hope you have a good experience reading it.
