Review Detail of Goksel in Broly The Saiyan of Legend!

can you elaborate whether it's not readable because grammar sucks or it's not readable because it's harem...

I guess you cant understand up there i thought even monkeys can understand dont push its just how smart you are

Your grammar is pretty bad , a monkey could do better.

I'm pretty sure you can do better :D

Harem and sex? Sex is even barely mentioned, apart from 2-3 times all the other are just summary implying he had sex and thats it. Sex/Harem doesnt even occupy 10% of the novel content

Is harem?

Make this 5%

even, monkeys can understand it? maybe because you wrote in a language, only monkeys can understand?

Let him be he is just jealous of the author for writing something interesting

lol so true this type of author is inconsistent no originality attracting perverted readers to jerk off his novels so it has views but he doesn't know that he is losing readers who genuinely like the story but ruined by author greed for views a shame

make it 0.01% since it only had 3 times with actual sex within it. (not sure if my math is correct though) XD

Gokesel go **** yourself this is amazzing

-I do not think that the Harem harms the story, you just have to put it in a good way and with a good development, for example a fanfic that I am doing is a harem but even so I still have many female readers.

I made a Broly fan-fic Would like your opinion

10% is enormous,you don't even know how to count ???