Review Detail of Chryiss in Angel Smile
Review detail
I’ve actually been silently reading this story ever since I stumbled across it, but I didn’t realize you read mine too. *bashful author* Also, I’ll have to be more vocal in future commenting I suppose. I was just too sad at points. Anyway, onto the review now that I’ve finally caught up these last dozen plus chapters. This story reminds me of a premium novel in how well it’s written. The characters are the absolute charm and selling point so to say of the story. Author is amazing at building characters and making them memorable. As a forgetful little reader, I need well developed and frequently mentioned characters to engrain their names and who they are in my mind. This is easier said than done, but this story does it skillfully and believably. Of course, with that said, that’s why it’s so painful to see them go through such tragedy. I feel like I’m just in a dark tunnel in the story with a few cracks of light. I so badly want them to be happy, safe, and stable in the end, but with Author’s allusions, I don’t think it’s happening any time soon (like Hyuk and Yeo Ri reunion). Don’t make them suffer too much anymore, okay Author? This poor reader’s heart can’t take much more. 💔 On another note, maybe some face slapping? That’s always mood lifting. Ah but really, don’t mind me; just continue on, you’re doing great! In short, if you’re debating whether to read this, go for it! Honestly, the only possible turnoff is the tragedy and taboo themes along with graphic descriptions, but besides that, you will not be disappointed. This drama comes to life.
Angel Smile
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Thank you for your kind review! I'm glad you're enjoying it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I'm the same type of reader too; if a character isn't mentioned frequent enough, my goldfish brain would be like, "Who the eff???" so I make it a point to mention the characters as frequent as possible ((since even I sometimes forget who's who >w<)). //gasps// How did you know I was reading your story?! Now I feel embarrassed because I hadn't touched it after I read the first chapter. :x Don't get me wrong; I'm a bingereader and MWTL only has some twenty chapters, so I thought I'd leave it to 'stew' for a little while. The genre is right up my alley, though! I'll drop a review soon~ I'll keep your tips in mind~ Thanks for reading! :)
Yes, that's my biggest difficulties in reading stories. :') Goldfish crew, haha! Lmao I only realized it when I saw a power stone from you when I last checked who voted. And I was like emergasdfghkl I'm reading your story! And same for binge reading. It's torture to read a bit each day waiting to know what happens next. I forcefully don't let myself read a story I really like because of that. That's why your original is so nice. ^u^ Us readers are lucky. Although I said I don't have much time, I can't deny I'm still a bit of a lazy arse, so I wish I had your dedication. :') You're welcome! That review was half me being emotionally attached to the characters and pleading to their creator on their behalf. XD But that shows good character creation like I mentioned before. I shall prepare myself to die a little bit more before I get a happy ending. *cough*
ihateyounot:Thank you for your kind review! I'm glad you're enjoying it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I'm the same type of reader too; if a character isn't mentioned frequent enough, my goldfish brain would be like, "Who the eff???" so I make it a point to mention the characters as frequent as possible ((since even I sometimes forget who's who >w<)). //gasps// How did you know I was reading your story?! Now I feel embarrassed because I hadn't touched it after I read the first chapter. :x Don't get me wrong; I'm a bingereader and MWTL only has some twenty chapters, so I thought I'd leave it to 'stew' for a little while. The genre is right up my alley, though! I'll drop a review soon~ I'll keep your tips in mind~ Thanks for reading! :)
