Review Detail of paramyis in Bad Love

Hello readers! Yes, that's right, it's the author here writing in my own review box... Just want to point out, I am not an experienced writer. What I write will most likely have a few mistakes regarding spelling and punctuation. Therefore, Although, I'm not aiming for anything too professional I am willing to improve. I'm open to critique...just not too harsh my fellow people I do have feelings as well ^~^... Thank you all so much for reading my story and hope you enjoy!