Review Detail of The10thCrow in Virtual World: Close Combat Mage

Come on. Can't you go along with the book and accept the premise that there are families of people carrying on the wuxia kung fu traditions from many generations ago? After all, the characters in this novel are definitely not being taught the kung fu taught at the gym you go to. In fact, Gu Fei (MC) is constantly griping about how his students as a PE teacher assume that his kung fu is the kung fu that you're talking about. This just seems like such a silly thing to criticize. All martial arts webnovels and comics blow their sports out of proportion.

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First this is fiction, why do you have to behave like that chick sitting in an action movie and trying to tell everybody that this movie is unrealistic and cars do not explode when you shoot at the tires? Second there are tons of kung fu styles and for example shaolin kung fu is still very strong and outsiders will not get taught their secret techniques. Third 2 years in martial arts is a beginner like you said and how do you think, as a beginner, you can correctly gauge skills of anyone higher then you? Just take belt system, a white belt will think black belts are gods and will most likely not understand the minute differences of 1dan or 4dan. You are just showing your ignorance with this comment