I enjoyed your Naruto fanfic and the description of this one intrigued me but now I find myself struggling to get past chapter 19. My main problem here is like everyone else I believe you make Nie Lie to big of a main character. That in itself wouldn’t be to bad but all his situations and decisions are a copy and paste of the beginning of TDAG. MC seems to have designated him self to be a side character which I guess isn’t that bad but it really isn’t my preference at all.
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