Review Detail of BIankInk in TODAG System In TODAG

I am already bored when i stared reading chapter 4

Yeah me too

Same

I'm sorry to tell this author but I didn't want to see the mc as a side kick or side character

Already bored.. Even though i try to read until chapter 8 .

I like the story idea but the MC should be the focus. MC should get the girls atleast ninger,etc. I mean it a fanfic it should concentrate on MC be great and all that. If I want read about Nie Li I can read Original, which update Extremely Slow. Time between snail run a mile...that slow to me.

I know right

I still do not know who's the Mc, I'm sorry I will not be able to read this author, I love your work but this is not my kind of read, I'm sorry :(

even i read from chapters 1-10 immediately drop -___- , like STB chapter 1-10 too many jokes to attract readers to waste time, don't focus on the future

Thank You For Making This Review .I am Currently Inspiring From Reviews Of More Popular Books To See What a Good Story Should be Like.For Example ,Just Like You Said Here,Focusing Too Much On The Side Characters .Again,I Appreciate That You Did This Review and Helped Me Out a Little.

Then should I bother reading this cause I stop as soon as you had the supposed mc allow a girl he wants get touch up by him, noone likes a cockhold but a cockhold

Already bored after chapter 4 the focus is on nie li not the mc of this novel i dont even know why the author name it 'todag system' when the entire focus is only the original mc its like the mc of this novel is a sub character

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I hate this story because it is basically TDG with a oc in it because the author mostly follows what nie lie does so I’m not reading this novel anymore

Thank you for this review now i know not to read this trashy book