Review Detail of broken_leaves in A journey of a knight

It has a lot of petontiel as a story, a couple of grammar and spelling mistakes but that's expected for an original novel (people, it's hard to deal with those grammar mistakes and certainty for someone who just started). So if you read this novel keep an open mind for small spelling mistakes and try to give the actual story a chance (that goes on for all original novels) which by the way has a lot of potential.