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Verae
VeraeLv45yr
2018-12-03 11:19

I was surprised when I found a fanfiction based on age of wushu Really loved that game. Still does somehow but it's been a while since I stopped playing it. Nice fanfic idea tho keep going pls you are doing great

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Daoist_Xuyi
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Hopefully they do better with the Part 2 which is in production

Verae
VeraeLv4

are you still playing? the game bring really good memories but because of studies and unstable internet i didn't get far in it personellay , always had to stop playing for few months , but still got decent character i guess . so yeah i like this new aow fanfic , lemme go far with the game through the MC of your story xD lemme feel being a super p2w for once i also like your other fanfic btw " Ultimate Naruto System in a Different World" thank you for the nice story that releives my boring moments and keep up the good work ,

Daoist_Xuyi:Hopefully they do better with the Part 2 which is in production
Daoist_Xuyi
Daoist_XuyiAuthor

😳Thanks!!

Verae:are you still playing? the game bring really good memories but because of studies and unstable internet i didn't get far in it personellay , always had to stop playing for few months , but still got decent character i guess . so yeah i like this new aow fanfic , lemme go far with the game through the MC of your story xD lemme feel being a super p2w for once i also like your other fanfic btw " Ultimate Naruto System in a Different World" thank you for the nice story that releives my boring moments and keep up the good work ,
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