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DamnPlotArmor
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I'm going to put my humble self at average 3 stars because I'm not shameless enough to show off my broken English and cringe worthy of terrible grammar I put into this novel. I promise that I will trying my best to keep up with at least one chapter a day. Eventhough it took me two freaking days to come up with the first chapter. For some reason, every times I reread my work, I ended up fixing things here and there. 10 drafts later, I still found flaws and kept deleting this line and added this line. 20 hours later, I was banging my head against the wall and gave up rechecking the quality and post it here right away. Please have mercy on this poor soul and go easy on me ... MEAW!

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Battle Royale of the Sinners

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VanessaNicole
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Lol, wow

OmegaStar69
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will there be a love story in this novel ???

DamnPlotArmor
DamnPlotArmorAuthorDamnPlotArmor

***Spoiler Alert*** ... ... ... ... ... ... Friday and Medusa will join the scenes later in the story. I can't promise you that there will be a full-blown romance since this novel was initially planned to be a kingdom-building + war + military story but I'll try my best to add some.

OmegaStar69:will there be a love story in this novel ???
OmegaStar69
OmegaStar69Lv10OmegaStar69

wow okay, but is there another love story when he was reincarnated in the story of three kingdoms? for example, mc falls in love or marries for political reasons. **: Because the story is about the kingdom if there is no harem or polygamy like food that lacks seasonings

DamnPlotArmor:***Spoiler Alert*** ... ... ... ... ... ... Friday and Medusa will join the scenes later in the story. I can't promise you that there will be a full-blown romance since this novel was initially planned to be a kingdom-building + war + military story but I'll try my best to add some.
OmegaStar69
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I mean with other female characters

OmegaStar69:wow okay, but is there another love story when he was reincarnated in the story of three kingdoms? for example, mc falls in love or marries for political reasons. **: Because the story is about the kingdom if there is no harem or polygamy like food that lacks seasonings
DamnPlotArmor
DamnPlotArmorAuthorDamnPlotArmor

lol You have a point. I'll try my best. You'd be surprised.

OmegaStar69:wow okay, but is there another love story when he was reincarnated in the story of three kingdoms? for example, mc falls in love or marries for political reasons. **: Because the story is about the kingdom if there is no harem or polygamy like food that lacks seasonings
Little_Dino
Little_DinoLv5Little_Dino

So this will be a harem?

addict_122
addict_122Lv14addict_122

Any romance/harem

DamnPlotArmor
DamnPlotArmorAuthorDamnPlotArmor

To be honest, I shouldn't give out spoiler or add any tag on my own novel before I can finalize my story plot-line since everything can still be changed, edited or altered in the middle of my writing. But when I read other novels I also want to see tags what kind of novel I'll be reading too. So I'm going to add a few tags which can give some of you a peace of mind. At the same time, I'm sure I'm going to get cursed by the haters once I did it ... TL:DL Yes, there will be a harem.

Randolph03
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Mother and daughter... oyakodon.... I'm sorry... please forgive this gentleman for having such a thought... but... but... WHO CAN RESIST THAT OYAKODON CHARM! MOREOVER FORSTER MOTHER, SO IT'S POSSIBLE THAT SHE'S A V!, well sorry for ranting too much

DamnPlotArmor:***Spoiler Alert*** ... ... ... ... ... ... Friday and Medusa will join the scenes later in the story. I can't promise you that there will be a full-blown romance since this novel was initially planned to be a kingdom-building + war + military story but I'll try my best to add some.
Randolph03
Randolph03Lv5Randolph03

Hopefully that mental girl is counted!

DamnPlotArmor:To be honest, I shouldn't give out spoiler or add any tag on my own novel before I can finalize my story plot-line since everything can still be changed, edited or altered in the middle of my writing. But when I read other novels I also want to see tags what kind of novel I'll be reading too. So I'm going to add a few tags which can give some of you a peace of mind. At the same time, I'm sure I'm going to get cursed by the haters once I did it ... TL:DL Yes, there will be a harem.
plastic_doll
plastic_dollLv5plastic_doll

A good synopsis! But another harem.. sigh at this point I'm not surprised anymore.. Good luck.

DamnPlotArmor:To be honest, I shouldn't give out spoiler or add any tag on my own novel before I can finalize my story plot-line since everything can still be changed, edited or altered in the middle of my writing. But when I read other novels I also want to see tags what kind of novel I'll be reading too. So I'm going to add a few tags which can give some of you a peace of mind. At the same time, I'm sure I'm going to get cursed by the haters once I did it ... TL:DL Yes, there will be a harem.
Yaski
YaskiLv5Yaski

Agreed, not surprised that this is has harem but meh the sypnosis is proper and has good story line so its worth reading but then again im not gonna read the 'romance' parts im in for the action😀😀

plastic_doll:A good synopsis! But another harem.. sigh at this point I'm not surprised anymore.. Good luck.
BookDao
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meow

squidsquish
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I've been meaning to read your novel for awhile now, but that loli in the cover is seriously putting me off. I'm glad to find an author that actually take time to plan out their plot line, on this site no less. It's like finding gold in a pile of feces. But that loli cover just aren't working for me. Anyway, this novel has a harem tag so is there any loli as a love interest?

DamnPlotArmor
DamnPlotArmorAuthorDamnPlotArmor

I'm so sorry for the cover art. It's just that I have no skill in photoshop. For the love interest, everybody's soul age is over 18+. As for the body's age, I can't guarantee. :-l

squidsquish:I've been meaning to read your novel for awhile now, but that loli in the cover is seriously putting me off. I'm glad to find an author that actually take time to plan out their plot line, on this site no less. It's like finding gold in a pile of feces. But that loli cover just aren't working for me. Anyway, this novel has a harem tag so is there any loli as a love interest?
squidsquish
squidsquishLv5squidsquish

Alright then.

DamnPlotArmor:I'm so sorry for the cover art. It's just that I have no skill in photoshop. For the love interest, everybody's soul age is over 18+. As for the body's age, I can't guarantee. :-l
xxLum
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Goodluck to you author-san.;)

Venusbaby
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Keep the good work going 👍

holachica
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it's okay. same things happens to me, I'm always rereading my work and finding small flaws ;- ;