Review Detail of Roktah in Tales of Demons and Gods- I am Shen Yue

the first thing you should do when you get reincarnated as shen yue at the same time as nie li is to kill him. send a few gold or black gold demon spritualists to him and kill him have them bring the body over. at the beginning of the story that is still easy as nie li has no cultivation he might be able to fight a bronze rank with his experience but that is his limit,make sure there is not a convenient place like a cliff in the suroundings when you assassinate him you dont want to give his plot armor any chance afterall. make sure there is a corpse and burn it. at that point in time nie li is a nobody. nobody will go out of their way to investigate what happened. that is an obvious thing to do as nie li hates shen yue more than the sacred family in itself, he will do whatever it takes to kill him. there are more things to do 1. get ahold of the demon pot 2. thunder sword bot things absolutely necessary for nie li's rise to power and then get rid of the sacred family but don't do it for free in your story you do none of these things. in your story shen yue is an observer at best certainly no protagonist. shen yue has the library of heavens path and for somehow managed to be weaker then nie li, that takes some skill with that kind of cheat. there is a reason why the original author dropped this novel. instead of being an editor you might want to think of becoming an author and rewrite some parts of the novel to actually make sense. make him get the pot, make him get the sword and learn some combat arts for a change. the mc has only cultivated never fought and has never bothered learning any combat arts despite owning the library of heavens path. just some of my misgivings for your novel. its still not too late to edit the earlier chapters.