Review Detail of AuHNG in Tales of Demons and Gods- I am Shen Yue

Read the book again and read this fanfiction. Too many plot holes. 1. Even if he knows the massage name and technique, does not mean he can do it well. 2. MC didn't cast her away. TDG is a harem novel. 3. The second girl didn't realize her feelings until after mc treated her. She wasn't blushing even tho she thought mc looked good. Just plotholes in the first chapter.