Review Detail of Graboid_42 in [DROP]Life of an Adventure
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I am going to spare the author from writing down what I would normally do in a review of a work such as this due to the fact that I think they might actually be a young child based on the level of writing exhibited. Nothing in this prologue is very well thought out at all. The scenes and actions are very clunky with no real congruity or realism involved. Author you should let your parents and teachers read your work before posting it in this type venue as the Internet can be a cold dark place that will crush you before you have a chance to develop.
[DROP]Life of an Adventure
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Blankiphone:Thank you for that but I write this just to help me cope with depression. But Thanks for the feedback.
Don't take words to heart author ... There will be criticisms ... Well you need to improve yourself slowly ... I write too just as a hobby though... So just improve your grammers and all ... Think bout the plot beforehand and then write it ... Good Luck
Blankiphone:Thank you for that but I write this just to help me cope with depression. But Thanks for the feedback.
I did not take it to heart but if you have more feedback then do please send it as I know that there would be positive and negative comment. A novel can't just be all good, it need negative too. Once again thank you for your feedback.
Greenscarface:Don't take words to heart author ... There will be criticisms ... Well you need to improve yourself slowly ... I write too just as a hobby though... So just improve your grammers and all ... Think bout the plot beforehand and then write it ... Good Luck
I am not planning to. I write this to take my mind off from reality as there are just too much in my mind. There is school, works and money to worry about. Thank you.
Immortal_Potato:You don’t need to publish it then. Unless you are looking for validation from strangers?