Same author as fairy tails strongest, one of the worst stories I’ve seen, not including my own. The universe doesn’t speak, many people give away to charity’s sometimes in the billions, thoughtful or not. Can I just say it’s garbage and be done?
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why write a review if you will just hate on it. give the author a way to make it better so we don't have to see you hate. Spend your time doing something more productive.
Then why didn’t you give me a way to improve if you're telling me to do this.
LOL 😂 that’s true. Here’s how. Magic (in this case ki) is an addition to the laws of reality and just like authors can add magic to their story they can add talking laws, imagin Einstein discovering that space-time can talk, he’d probably name the language “space-time language” or something. That said, I agree, this is not the best way to deal with reincarnation (presuming that’s the reason the universe was given the ability to talk), but “fairy tail‘s strongest” was even worse in this specific regard because the powers he received were changed after reincarnation, a shameless use of deus ex machina which could have been avoided with proper planning or editing. Back to this story, I think this approach to reincarnation is perfectly fine, because it allows authors & readers to focus on the story. The same for the charity, it’s a reason for his high karma, an excuse to put him in the story’s setting. Could have been done better, I understood it was something unique to his situation that made him inspire so much betterment which could have been explained to a greater detail. And it DOES beg the question of HOW indirectly karma can be earned, it was said that he was happy with giving to charity and he got angry at injust people later in the story. This might indicate a traumatic experience to facilitate such empathy, now, should the perpetrator receive any amount of that karma, the perpetrator is after all vital to the conclusion. And I believe he (mc) can’t be credited with people finding inspiration in his actions, at least not THAT much. Now, I have to say I also think the story is questionable, but that’s mostly in later chapters, when the author forgets some details in the plot, world building or character personality. And I still read for other aspects. (I would probably give it a 2/5, all of it for the ideas used. 4/5 for the ideas alone, execution not included)
To help with forgetting plot: it'd be best to have some notes about the story, and characters.
