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Hundred_Lilies
Hundred_LiliesLv145yr
2018-12-09 23:30

The story is interesting and has potential, but the mc is just so stupid and quite frankly ruins the novel. All she does is complain about her situation, but she does absolutely nothing to change it; she's all bark and no bite and that has been going on since chapter one. Of all the characters, she's the least interesting one and that's a problem since she's the mc.

The Brothers Kim

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goldenmaknaejk
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Very interesting story. I can tell that the author has drawn inspiration from other works and there is not anything wrong with that. The characters are well developed and the plot can be a bit confusing at times, but I assume it will tie together at the end. However, despite these minor flaws, what follows is a wonderful reading of a very enjoyable story line.

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stanbtsbeach
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The character development is very good and in par with the great storyline. The author knows how to create a world by detailed descriptions using words the aren't corny unlike other fics.

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kamiye25
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I really look forward to the updates. Impressive work you have and your storyline... I'm looking forward to your twists too.. Can we have more than a chapter upload please... It will be highly appreciated. Well done

5yr
Salwa141291
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Interesting story. I like how the story development and the characters interaction with each other is put into details. Hoping for some romance soon..

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lady_shierra01
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Please update more...I really miss all the characters and the story....ive been looking forward to read more of your story this book is really interesting to read😊😊😊😊

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This story is very interesting...can't help myself to look forward to the next chapter... Guessing who's the Male lead of the story..,all characters is mysterious and interesting....

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