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Ptitkactus
PtitkactusLv135yrPtitkactus

Honestly your story was one of the best on this site, but the las 4-5 chapters since the end of the tournament don't really fill me with hope for the next part of your story... I mean i know your mc is not omnipotent, but with the extremly long life he had, and all the dificulty for reaching the peak , he should have known to not show his hand so soon... :( Look what happened now, the members of his clan are killed like flies, what was the point of create a clan so soon if it's got destroyed so easily :(

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Unsealing: Omnipotent Father

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OmnipotentDad
OmnipotentDadAuthorOmnipotentDad

1.) Character Building. 2.) Unsealing emotions. 3.) For the MC to know the difference of his past and present life. 4.) To continue the story. 5.) To show the abilities of the Black Soul Sea. 6.) The appearance of someone. 7.) Start of the "Unsealing" 8.) New knowledge. 9.) The start of Awakening his new found abilities. 10.) Why the novel is called "Unsealing: Omnipotent Father". That's mostly the important factors and I can't list anymore minor ones. as it wouldn't be enough for a day to say everything. Thanks for leaving a bad review without contents, deeply appreciate it.

OmnipotentDad
OmnipotentDadAuthorOmnipotentDad

Like the one below you.

topak
topakLv14topak

Whats the point on making claN or secT if YouR mc is kinda weak, why?i dont get It, wheres the 1 billion yrs old in that if cant even figured that out, he started it too when he was still cripple