Review Detail of Gleens in Sinbad's Rule of the Multiverse (Dropped)

Although I appreciate the new world, the story is still somewhat cliche (Killed by electricity/lightning, reincarnation, meeting god, system, free wishes, reincarnated in world of choice, etc). There isn’t too much character development. I would have rated this slightly higher, but I can’t stand how the dialogue is written the (Character): (Character 2): (Character): Style of writing takes away any immersion I feel when I read the book. It feels unnatural to read like this. The dialogue itself feels stilted and unlifelike, though that may just be me. I’m fine with op MCs and harems, as long as they’re well implemented into the story. To me, the story seems a bit rushed. Although I understand that the author is trying to move the plot along, it would be nice to see the world fleshed out a bit more (for the people who haven’t watched the anime, or have forgotten). For example, in the first chapter, meets an Earth Dragon attacking a caravan. He kills it and Guy 1 and Guy 2 express their amazement. For those who have watched and remember the anime, this may be a cool moment. For others though, there are many questions left unanswered such as ‘How strong are earth dragons?’ Or ‘What is a Danger beast?’. Those are questions that go unanswered. The writing quality is average at best. There is a lack of descriptions, and the author seems to go back to the same handful of adjectives to describe things. The author seems to forget to ‘show don’t tell’, making most chapters quite dull and uninteresting. I know this novel has a lot of potential, and I want to see it improve. Hopefully I will come back, and if my opinions change, I will write a new (hopefully more positive) review.