I can't, I am sorry but I cannot bear the pain of reading this mushy mash of a novel. Although it has an average story so far but your novel has a lot of wrong in both grammar and spelling. So yeah good luck I guess. BTW I put 3 star in stability of updates since I only read up to chapter 4.
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