Review Detail of DDDthisDeK in An ancient World

As a new story from someone who hasn’t written before this shows a lot of promise and potential. The biggest flaw for now is the bad grammar and sentence structure, but the author knows that and tries to improve his work. So far I have to say good job and keep up the great work! If I see that the flaws have been fixed and the writing becomes stable I will edit my review to a better score. I look forward to what you come up with.👍