The story is great. Fast development but with an explanation. The existence of the myth is a nice touch, I hope it come back. The fact that they can't learn past 50 is strange. The worst is the grammar, the way the sentences are written or thoughts expressed. It feels like the entire thing was passed through google translate to many time.
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