This is literally just a copy of the original story, it's all canon apart from the tiniest of things, like a bit of extra romance, having enough balls to date the girls, no R-18 as far as I've read yet either, no badassery. It's literally the same as the canon. The author doesn't seem to know how to deviate from the plot even slightly. He could've handled the Lily route in a different way and it would've been fine, however he decided to "let her steal the knife" for no reason. Why couldn't he just catch her in the act and then punished her a little? despite her circumstances she still betrayed his trust. Then he could've helped her all he wanted, however he's still putting on the ***** act and acting weaker than he is to go according to the canon. I'm not gonna say everything is the exact same, however it's 90% canon at the very least. So if you want DanMachi Vanilla but in text then read this story. Author, quite frankly. I think you might actually be proud of this so far however, from what I've read you've stuck straight to the canon like a baby to a breast. Have some balls and actually add some of your own story.
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