A longer size of the chapters is expected. Over sugar coating is to be avoided. More involvement of additional characters is to be expected. Too much haziness in the story. Story line should be clear. To much unrealistic scenarios. Make lead always finds his ways to the female lead somehow and that is shown as coincidence which is ridiculous.
Straight to the Blue Skies
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