Item: Rebirth: General, Don't Mess Around!
Rating: 1
Author: hanplum

hanplumLv34yr

2020-11-20 09:34

theres some things you should know before reading this story: its a very slow romance, really slow, I mean it, there's 5428 chapters and its still ongoing... I wouldn't recommend this book, its meh. i like the MC journey/character growth, but of course they are some cons, in the beginning she was great (doing her revenge, face slapping) but overtime, she started to go with flow and have people clean up the mess for her. they are a lot of problems regarding the romance. first of all the MC is 14 (the body) and the ML is 20. not a big fan of that but its still quite acceptable. But can the ML at least wait till she comes till age(and okay with it) before you start touching her more than necessarily?!?! the MC is not interested of the ML, but he continues his advances (rather aggressively), which is... scary, creepy. The ML stalks her, manipulates her ,and flirts in inappropriate situations. Also it doesn't seem like a consensual relationship. Their conversations are always so long (few chapters long) and usually about the same thing, very boring. Some are too short and some are too long, its very frustrating. it can get quite boring but you will be interested what will happen to the MC next. well, if you want to still read it, go ahead, do what you want to do :)

Rebirth: General, Don't Mess Around!

Azure Ascend

4.6

4314 Chs

Liked by 7 people

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Shaggnasty22Lv11

Yea when I read this novel I couldn't stop thinking that the ML is grooming the MC. It made me feel icky for even reading this story. MC just want to get strong and live a good life. ML is just keep brainwashing her to be reliant on him and let him touch her more and more. This story almost seems like a guide to groom young girls.

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It Finally Came Out! I'm so excited! 🎈 MC (Ye Jian) is strong and not pampered; She works her ass off for the things she need. In short, she's hard-working! 🎈The characters progression is kinda slow, but that development is good, and the interaction between them are enjoyable. The story is slow-paced but it hooks u up on every detail. 🎈It's not that kind where ML sees FL and directly falls for her; their development is good, appreciation and admiration comes and their chemistry is so great. 🎈I am also with you fellow readers and let's all see where this novel takes us!

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