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AlyaHadid
AlyaHadidLv45yr
2019-02-11 17:23

It's actually a good story............I've read the raws.................... it's better than most of the stories you think this is similar to them.............I hope the updates to be frequent and consistent.....................................over all I'll recommend to read it .............................

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noDramaLlama
noDramaLlamaLv11

Do you maybe know are there a lot of misunderstandings or is it light/hearted?

brave123
brave123Lv3

😐

superdogmissy
superdogmissyLv5

Yes

AlyaHadid
AlyaHadidLv4

Actually if I'm being honest here then there are quite a few of misunderstanding but believe me this misunderstanding will only lead to more sweetness between the ml and fl. Stories like this can't be completed without any misunderstanding as misunderstanding is part of the character development and plot development. But I can say for sure that this book is better in misunderstanding when compared to bringing the nation's husband home. Have a happy read :)

noDramaLlama:Do you maybe know are there a lot of misunderstandings or is it light/hearted?
AlyaHadid
AlyaHadidLv4

Actually if I'm being honest here then there are quite a few of misunderstanding but believe me this misunderstanding will only lead to more sweetness between the ml and fl. Stories like this can't be completed without any misunderstanding as misunderstanding is part of the character development and plot development. But I can say for sure that this book is better in misunderstanding when compared to bringing the nation's husband home. Have a happy read :)

noDramaLlama:Do you maybe know are there a lot of misunderstandings or is it light/hearted?
huihahahahah
huihahahahahLv4

I agree with you it is a good story.

noDramaLlama
noDramaLlamaLv11

Thank you! I’ll give it a try then :3

AlyaHadid:Actually if I'm being honest here then there are quite a few of misunderstanding but believe me this misunderstanding will only lead to more sweetness between the ml and fl. Stories like this can't be completed without any misunderstanding as misunderstanding is part of the character development and plot development. But I can say for sure that this book is better in misunderstanding when compared to bringing the nation's husband home. Have a happy read :)
AlyaHadid
AlyaHadidLv4

Your welcome!! Have a happy and good read! Let me know if you liked it or not? :)

noDramaLlama:Thank you! I’ll give it a try then :3
Daad
DaadLv4

They said taht there is rape ??? is it true ?

AlyaHadid
AlyaHadidLv4

No. There is no rape. But if you count kisses or some kind of intimate touching taken without consent as rape I don't know what to say. I mean the above mentioned is definetly abuse but I won't say it as necessarily rape. The fl and ml love each other but they are dense more than enough to not understand it. I'll say this for sure that you'll see bipolarity (sort of not exactly) or heavy amount of changes in emotions with fl and ml in this book. This type of books really test your patience.

Daad:They said taht there is rape ??? is it true ?
AlyaHadid
AlyaHadidLv4

No. There is no rape. But if you count kisses or some kind of intimate touching taken without consent as rape I don't know what to say. I mean the above mentioned is definetly abuse but I won't say it as necessarily rape. The fl and ml love each other but they are dense more than enough to not understand it. I'll say this for sure that you'll see bipolarity (sort of not exactly) or heavy amount of changes in emotions with fl and ml in this book. This type of books really test your patience.

Daad:They said taht there is rape ??? is it true ?
Daad
DaadLv4

fortunately there isn't. Thanks sooo much for the reply

AlyaHadid:No. There is no rape. But if you count kisses or some kind of intimate touching taken without consent as rape I don't know what to say. I mean the above mentioned is definetly abuse but I won't say it as necessarily rape. The fl and ml love each other but they are dense more than enough to not understand it. I'll say this for sure that you'll see bipolarity (sort of not exactly) or heavy amount of changes in emotions with fl and ml in this book. This type of books really test your patience.
AlyaHadid
AlyaHadidLv4

You're always welcome

Daad:fortunately there isn't. Thanks sooo much for the reply
pinybbb
pinybbbLv1

where did you read the raws? can you please share

niki_au_
niki_au_Lv14

Is the entire novel based around their school age years or will we get to see them in their 20s?

AlyaHadid
AlyaHadidLv4

I read the raws from some Chinese website long back and I don't particularly remember it! But tbh if I personally suggest you then you should read this professionally translated one coz if you read the raws by using Google translator then you'll pull out your hairs for sure, it's so irritating like the names are changes, the grammar is bad than a elementary student, the gender is all mixed up. Some website even though they have full book they ask for subscription. But don't worry if I get to know any website for raws I'll let you know. 😊✌🏻

pinybbb:where did you read the raws? can you please share
AlyaHadid
AlyaHadidLv4

I read the raws from some Chinese website long back and I don't particularly remember it! But tbh if I personally suggest you then you should read this professionally translated one coz if you read the raws by using Google translator then you'll pull out your hairs for sure, it's so irritating like the names are changes, the grammar is bad than a elementary student, the gender is all mixed up. Some website even though they have full book they ask for subscription. But don't worry if I get to know any website for raws I'll let you know. 😊✌🏻

pinybbb:where did you read the raws? can you please share
AlyaHadid
AlyaHadidLv4

Yes we'll get to see them in their 20s too. Don't worry. Have a happy read :)

niki_au_:Is the entire novel based around their school age years or will we get to see them in their 20s?
AlyaHadid
AlyaHadidLv4

Yes we'll get to see them in their 20s too. Don't worry. Have a happy read :)

niki_au_:Is the entire novel based around their school age years or will we get to see them in their 20s?
shiinoh1
shiinoh1Lv4

thank you for your review! but im gonna read this if its completed haha!

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Dr_SaltedFish
Dr_SaltedFishLv11

I picked random novels from the newly released section and read them up to chapter 10 before reviewing. I want to be fair and admit I don't typically read romance novels because they're usually very manufactured. For me, romance hinges on 3 things: chemistry, organic interactions and dialogue. If either chemistry or interaction is lacking, it comes off as a typical "factory produced romance", where the main couple are "in love" because plot. Obviously being a strong writer helps to tie the 3 points together and create a story, while for a manufactured romance, that is not needed. Up until chapter 10, I see a lacking in all that. I'll admit chemistry can be developed later in the story, but the writing so far isn't strong enough to make me want more. The story comes off flat and manufactured. The drama seemed forced that builds up to a face slapping session. It doesn't bode well for where this novel is heading if the author needed this cop out to even kick start the novel. The first show of the MCs comes off as weak, the girl was immediately compared to a "plastic Barbie" to make her look better, and the guy showed dominance by flexing on a pervert. The girl was supposed to be a fiery one, if she met a ***** courting trouble with her, she would have wanted to be the one to deliver the smack down. But she went and hide behind the guys pants instead and let him finish her off, how anti-climatic. The setting for first interaction were also somewhat iffy, 16 for the girl and some 17 to early twenties for the guy, in a bar. The bouncer let her in when she dropped the guy's name, if age isn't an issue, what about checking procedures? She could have known her target was in there, paid the driver to chase her, and slipped in with a weapon to eliminate him. Bam, rich kid dead in their bar. But that won't happen because plot (and also romance novel). Even if the bouncer knew him, either due to his frequent visits or etc, the lack of security procedures to enter a bar meant for the high society is appalling. There are presumably trucks full of rich people in there, where an accident can happen and cripple a portion of the upper echelons of society. The security should have been extra tight, always. Otherwise, no rich, child or otherwise, would ever patronized this place. There should be no way that girl (who isn't dressed like she belonged in the bar, had no identification, no reputation or otherwise) was allowed to enter. At least, not without confirmation from the guy whose name she had used. Minimum they would need to check with him first, otherwise, any random person can just name drop and step in to harrass or steal from their clients. That was why that scene was bad overall for me, but plot. Also, driving while drunk and not crashing on the way home. Again, plot. Then builds up to the semi naked bathroom scene. Also, plot. The pervert driver could have been done away with and the scene would still have been fine. She went to the bar, got stuck outside, threw a tantrum and demand for him, bouncer got someone to check with him, he comes out, saw girl who tries to punch him, damn she became hot, start her physical description, he waves away the bouncers casually and drove her home in his sports car. There's enough content there for girl description and guy flexing his monies too. Leaving his ex behind in the bar without word is also another kind of flexing. In short, a typical manufactured romance. Nothing organic about it, with unnecessary fake drama peppered in. Like the author wanted to include some excitement but couldn't think of anything good, and ended up throwing in the face slapping to make up for it. Unfortunately, mediocre.

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