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KilljoyZ
KilljoyZLv45yr
2019-05-28 20:52

It's all a bit boring but i can see that this plot has some potential to be a natural one, it's going to be all good if the ml and the FL can interact with each other.

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claire_de_lune_xx
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Just finished scanning the raw and it give my heart a major heart ache ๐Ÿ˜ญโค I mean, I love and hate the story; it is well written and very realistic. MAJOR SPOILER ALLERT!!! Here's how the story goes. After rebirth, Qiao Nan was able to overturn every advances of her enemies (Ding Jiayi, Qiao Zijin, Wang Yang, Chen Feng-her scumbag ex in past life, Qui girl from that English apprenticeship under Elder Liu, and more.) Zhai Sheng confesses his love to her, she doubted at first because of her past experiences and that she is so young. But Brother Zhai is very persistent. He climbed on Qiao Nan's window and they made love. Yieh. At first, Brother's Zhai mother doesn't like her as a daughter-in-law, only liked her as a daughter to the point that Zhai's sister got jealous. Anyway, they got married. She married through Zhu family's household because they want to adopt her before and the Lee, Zhu and Liu household give shares for her dowry since Qiao Dad doesnt have enough money. Nonetheless, the marriage ended well. She became successful, worked in Ministry of Foreign (can't remember) and her posistion is unshakable, and she was already married with Zhai Sheng way back in college and has triplets, 2 boys and 1 girl, because Brother Zhai is a wild beast in bed. ๐Ÿ˜ Also in this lifetime, Zijin dies, and Qiao Dad divorced Ding mom. BUUUUUUUT. MAJOR PLOT TWIST. Qiao Nan woke up from her coma after the car accident. Meaning, all that has happened was just a dream ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ˜ญ Zhu Baogu didn't exist since he died because she wasnt there to save him. She didn't become an English translator and didn't meet Old Liu... AND.. Zhai Sheng of course ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ’” If you can't handle the pain, you can drop it by 1750+ chapter I think. But if you persist as well... She met Zhai Sheng after she left the hospital. Zhai Sheng was a divorced man and was on a wheel chair. Yep, he married the Qiu girl under the pressure of his family but didn't love him at all. They were now in their forties and Qiao Nan was the one who took care of him because her landlord's son is Brother Zhai's subordinate and arrange NanNan to take care of him. They got married, Zhai's parents and sister love her, and yes, they had triplets as well. Well, Brother Zhai never touch Qiu girl but is a wild beast when it comes to Qiao Nan, from her dream and to the present. ๐Ÿ˜ Zhu Baogu's dad wants to adopt NanNan so he arranged her to be married from his household (just like from her dream since Qiao Dad cant afford his dowry). Also, when Zhu's Dad died, he gave all his inheritance to NanNan (somehow same from her dream but this time, not Older Liu's inheritance). In the end, Zhai's parents died. Also Qiao Dad. During funeral, Ding Jiayi included her hair in cremation of Qiao Dad's body in hope that they'll meet again in the future. When the triplets are on their 25+ years, Qiao Nan and Zhai Sheng are already 70 and 75. The kids got married so NanNan and Zhai Sheng can still see their grandchildren. They died hand in hand ๐Ÿ˜ญโค As for Zijin, she died alone. She has a son from Chen Scumbag but fortunately, the kid is very sensible and only treat Qiao Nan as a mother since Zijin wasnt their as he grows up. He married the daughter of Zhai Sheng's sister. Back to Zijin, she died one month after it was discovered that she has liver cancer. On her death bed, she wishes that she would not meet Qiao Nan, Qiao Donglian and Ding Jiayi in the future again. And the last words, "This life is tiring." I LOVE THIS BOOK. 2000+ IS WORTH THE READ. AND YOU WILL LOVE THE TRIPLETS' SHENANIGANS ๐Ÿ˜‚ AND QIAO NAN AND ZHAI SHENG'S LOVE, IN DREAM AND IN REALITY, IS REALLY TOUCHING ๐Ÿ˜ญโคโคโคโค KUDOS TO AUTHOR. WASNT EXPECTING THAT PLOT TWIST. ๐Ÿ’”

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