Review Detail of Avdran in Harry Potter and the Other Boy Who Lived

I will shamelessly review myself. First, WRITING QUALITY: 5 STARS I know I have just an okay writing quality but it should be a goal for me to improve my English. I have to encourage myself, you know? Hahahaha. STABILITY OF UPDATES: 5 STARS It should be okay, 5 chapters a week is a promise I can fulfill. It may be more in the future. But I'm writing between 1500 to 2000 words per chapter. That is tiring enough. STORY DEVELOPMENT: 5 STARS I'm really enjoying writing the novel and I will bring a lot of new developments to it outside Harry Potters books story development. CHARACTER DESIGN: 5 STARS, For now, I just created a few, because some already existed in the books, but I believe people's character are a set of all the thing they live in their lives. So as I will be changing some events and happenings, character design will change in relation to the books. World Background: 5 STARS, For now, more than character design, it should be the thing I deserve less stars, but as I said, there will be a whole new World Background outside Harry Potters books background.