Review Detail of midnight_bloom in Milady's Fine Gentleman

Hi guys, Author here. I know this is shameless, but I believe in my novel. I hope anyone who pass by here would give it a chance. It has lots of fluffs, but I also want something with substance and plot. The writing style somewhat jumps off to other scenarios - it's simply my writing style. I also don't believe to drag it on unnecessarily. Every chapter has its purpose whether to explain, entertain, build up or uncover secrets, or even give hints. I love all my characters even the bad ones. <3 I really put my best efforts in it since it's my first novel. I hope you can give out a review, for feedback, more than anything else. Would very much appreciate that. Thanks!