First a question before the review. There are some old reviews even tho the chapters are new... maybe you deleted the chapters to remake the novel, that i don't know. But i read he joined the straw hats in a review and so, does he join the straw hats in the 'remake'? Story wise: Interesting that he started as a slave and the system is... well a system. Writing: Some mistakes here and there but nothing unreadable. Story: Not enough out there to really say anything. Char design: Same as story World background: Should be good as in OP has a good background. Dont know if it wil be shown in this novel tho... atleast not yet. (not enough chaps)
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