This novel is one of the few I look forward to. Most novels are very generic and while this novel is not like a whole new world, I at least want to point the focus towards the consistent quality of chapters. Up to now everything we/I read is important. I jave yet to see any fillers or something similar which is quite an achievement if you compare some novels of this type. But let's rate the novel: Writing Quality: 5 Stars -As I already mentioned the grammar and structur of even basic sentences is very good. It is not 100% but I have yet to see a novel without typos. -The basic storyline is consistent and the story doesn't get jumbled around so the story stays in an easy to understand path. Stability of Updates: 5 Stars -7 chapters per week plus bonus chapters for certain milestones -I don't think we had any chapter missing in between. Story Development: 4 Stars -Right now it's just 4 Stars but the story is still at it's starting point. Judging by the current pace its gonna be 7-10 chapters till the story really kicks off. -I'll adjust the Stars at that point. Character Design: 4 Stars -This is actually hard to decide. At this point the MC is slightly generic. On the other side I can see the potential for the future since the story has yet to fix itself onto his current behaviour -Side characters are sufficiently described and their mood and actions are well presented. -We got the normal bitchy character, stern teacher/elder type, cute jail-loli etc. -Let's see what else will appear. World Background: 4 Stars -Same as with the characters: cultivation world, god like super cultivatiors, sects and probably kingdoms -We have the “previous“ MC the super strong imprisoned dude who either died or his body is left somewhere. -Aside from that we have the normal knowledge about cultivation(dual), herbs and alchemy etc. As of now the story is normal based on the characters and story line, and otherwise we have a nice writing style and the possibility of the author making something different from the other eastern fantasy novels. I am excited for the future.
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LIKEI'm pretty sure the MC will return to that cliff prison. He a) owes the old dude a debt and judging by his character he'll try to find him and b) I'm sure he'll try to get revenge on the Emperor and get his wife for his dual cultivation. They did sleep with each other.
Now this would be the funniest twist ever then, the old dude was dying, he needed a new body, let's send this prisoner to be reincarnated and I'll just use his body to live on, and then they will fight, would be funny but ridiculous at the same time
It was The Heavenly Emperor's daughter who he slept with
It was The Heavenly Emperor's daughter who he slept with
It was The Heavenly Emperor's daughter who he slept with