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MovingCorpse
MovingCorpseLv76yr
2018-11-06 22:39

Too many 1 star reviews, I' m here to balance it out. Tbh, it's enjoyable. And I read it until chapter 200/300. The MC and plots are quite irritating for me tho...

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DepressedDaoist
DepressedDaoistLv12

If the MC and plot irritates you, what makes it enjoyable?

MovingCorpse
MovingCorpseLv7

Well, if the mc and plot irritate you, then I guess you still can enjoy the girls Hahaha. Just kidding, I mean if it's really that bad, why would I keep reading it? I only said 'quite' right?

DepressedDaoist:If the MC and plot irritates you, what makes it enjoyable?
DepressedDaoist
DepressedDaoistLv12

Ok f*ck this novel, this author, and all these extra girls and and plots. It's so aggravating to read it. Tang Yin forever 😭

MovingCorpse:Well, if the mc and plot irritate you, then I guess you still can enjoy the girls Hahaha. Just kidding, I mean if it's really that bad, why would I keep reading it? I only said 'quite' right?
Clara_the_fish
Clara_the_fishLv10

by 500 though, it gets rather bland.

TheFoolishReader
TheFoolishReaderLv4

I agree lol

DepressedDaoist:Ok f*ck this novel, this author, and all these extra girls and and plots. It's so aggravating to read it. Tang Yin forever 😭
DepressedDaoist
DepressedDaoistLv12

I gave up around 3500 lol I can't even imagine anyone making it to 7000+ smh

Clara_the_fish:by 500 though, it gets rather bland.
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One of my most hated novel, It is in my Top 10 Novel I should just forget and stop reading. Then again I hated this novel and I think everyone knows why but for the sake of reading I can still read this I think. My first impression about this novel is horrible, seriously what kind of an assassin that is so poor and idiotic. The MC is clearly a masochist as he love being insulted and downgraded by women as shown all over the story. Clearly their is a very lack of understanding when it comes to Romance. And this novel is OVERFLOWING with MISUNDERSTANDING scenes. Their is no HAREM so far but If their is then it is just to much B*llsh*tting at this point the last thing you want in this novel is a harem. The Main Character is the biggest loser of all in this novel. He is being downgraded by every women he meet. He clearly has skills but the author make a story where just to show case the AMAZINGness of the MC which is very idiotic and bland. For example a case that was not solve for ages and MC just solve it easily. A problem that big CEO and blah blah can't solve was just solve by the mc so easily. It is so idiotic that main problems in the story are being solve EASILY by the MC. Take that part where the 2 b*tches was kidnapped, The father is self proclaimed powerful business man his right-hand man is a self proclaimed powerful at first the author SHOWS their attemp of saving the Kidnap b*tches and wasted many chapters of this and that by the end of the day MC save the 2 B*tches with 1 chapter alone in the most IDIOTIC way. This clearly shows that the author just want a MC save the day theme which is very very very BORING and IDIOTIC! Now lets talk about the girls in the story, I wanna first mention the 2 B*tches whom was introduce early in the story. I seriously find them Horrible to the point that reading them is like chewing broken glasses. I seriously start to question the mentality how this kind of characters are being created. I seriously hated them and often skip the part where they appear since I often just read idiotic line of this and that. Yet despite not reading them you won't really miss anything.As for other girls they are very much one sided, They appear here and their without follow up especially that police women, she only appears if the author feels like activating the MC save the day option. The only decent girl so far was the MC POTENTIAL girlfriend although her only flaw was her paranoia but that was justified because of the experience her best-friend encounter. But the author seems love to troll to much and even this girl is just in the POTENTIAL girlfriend line and so far not the official partner of the MC in the story. So far I feel like author plan to make a BL story as almost every girl in the story dislike the MC. They might have a few crush on the MC but the HATE is overflowing to the girls. The author might wanted to have a Tsundare type of character but all I can say is Sadist women all around the MC. As for the Villains of the story. They are a Masterpiece actually the author made the villain here so idiotic that I can only praise them this much. Imagine a villain that appear in the early 10's chapters now good news you can still see the same villain appearing around 500+ chapters later or more. Was he a big time boss enemy? No for crying out loud this villain is just a small time minor enemy yet keep appearing here and their doing idiotic stuff and being highlighted like it's the end of the world. On the other hand BIG TIME villains are being thrown behind the scene like some shadow or something. The most Idiotic part is this Villain are being defeated easy especially if author activate the MC save the day option. Imagine a nonsense chapter of enemy planning this planning that, force reading enemies POV doing this and that. Forcing you to read to much b*llsh*tting of enemy side. Then author activate the MC save the day option and booom all the nonsense defeated in the most idiotic way. Why this novel is trash summary? (it's a bias POV from me) To much Dragging (even filler chapters paled compare to this novel) No Important development all plot is going in circles in a never ending repetitive loop. To much explaining this and that. A chapter can be sum up in 1 - 2 sentence. Villains are very idiotic to the point that you even question your own definition of a villain characters. MC save the day option(you can notice author are repeating this skill all over the story) If only he can save the story in an epic why but sadly the way he save the day is very idiotic most of the time. The Female characters are TRASH especially the 2 B*tches. and so on...

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