Review Detail of behem0th in Harem de MCS (+18)

The storyline is still kind of light as it switches POV a lot but so far its decent, it seems to still be laying down the background for the protagonist(would say mc but in this story a lot of the wives are titled MC). I believe the novel has a lot of potential but a big hang up is the lack of an editor, the author isn't a native(it's google translated, BEWARE) so I'm taking it the protagonist isn't really "punching" his wives. If there was an editor to clean it up and make reading flow smoother I'd change my rating.