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BabyTanuki
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2018-09-30 09:56

Cute story. The back story maybe could have been done in a Prologue. I didn't care for those chapters as much. I liked the actual story more. Are vampires known in the world and accepted? He seemed to take her being a vampire with a pretty chill attitude. The dialogue is pretty natural and I enjoyed how light it was. It is a good feel good kind of story. Only some minor errors, but nothing that really is offensive. We are all human, so no biggie. Good job. I wish there was a bit more description of the setting. You did a good job in the beginning of chapter 1, but nothing much since then. Good job

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