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MilordInk
MilordInkLv136yr
2018-09-27 05:02

This is a promising novel. It has a lot of breathing room, and needs to grow a little in terms of bringing out the emotional parts of the story, but the idea is sound, and the writing doesn't really feel rough. Few grammar mistakes, and I can see the comedy. If you want a light read, this is a good top ten pick, everyone. Give it a try!

Chloe & Owen: A (Bloody Hilarious) Love Story

ImBloo
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Thank you for the kind words. I'll improve my writing in subsequent chapters :)

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ImBloo
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Hello, this is the author. I hope you enjoy this romantic comedy novel. Have a nice day and good luck in your (love) life! -----------------------------

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Ameana
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Demii
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It is a good book.. Giving readers something fresh to look for and that is amazing. I really appreciate the writer and I'm going to be so addicted

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ImAlsoBloo
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Despite myself I'm enjoying this. Perhaps because of snarky mc. Reminds me of Hotel Transylvania and that vampire documentary. Patriarch Petyr? Lol Hope there won't bee too much sappy romance and decent comedy in future haps.

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HavenlyJeep
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Story Premise (5 out of 5): - A vampire romance story but with a nice twist. I like that. Writing Quality (5 out of 5): - Good array of vocabulary and smooth grammar in each chapters. A first-person POV which has not been done in a long while, specially in this website. Easy to read and the flow of it is good. Story Development (5 out of 5): - What can I say? I like it! The initial chapters already set a temporary goal, which is nice. The pacing is great. Good flow of the story. Character Design (4 out of 5): - I'm a little critical on this one. I only know how Chloe looks like, but Owen needs more description. And also Chloe's siblings. The dialogues are great! Rare to see that these days. Each characters have distinct personalities that make each one identifiable. World (4 out of 5): - It's modern day( I guess?). I know where the characters are and what they're doing, so that's good. I just hope that I know where they are in real life if it's set in real time. And one last thing. This story piqued my interest, and it''s mainly due to the chemistry between Chloe and Owen. Good stuff. I'll be sure to read this as I have it in my library now.

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