Review Detail of HavenlyJeep in Azure Lightning

Story Premise (3 out of 5): - MC has amnesia, don't know where he comes from, tries to find out. Also has a mentor. Not new, but there's that. Writing Quality (4 out of 5): - Grammar and vocabulary are good. Split the paragraph into smaller ones for the readers to enjoy reading. Spend some time editing each chapters, since there a lot of missing commas, punctuations, etc. Story Development (4 out of 5): - Slow-paced. It's fine this way, but there's not much to learn after five chapters through. Other than that, it's great so far. Character Design (4 out of 5): - If there's one thing I want to point out regarding this, is that the MC has no description of himself(?). I don't know how it looks like. The other characters I could grasp perfectly, but the MC is bland. Too little dialogue. World (4 out of 5): - Again, slow paced. Not much to be said, other than a mainland, a forest, and Flaming Lance.