Review Detail of Arkinslize in Journey Of The Bright Immortal
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To be honest, i am really surprised. I read 6 chapters in a row for something that should have been a simple review swap. Added to my collection. First chapter has some info dumps, but i consider it is necessary to set the background. This story is a standard eastern fantasy in many aspects, especially the beginning, but take a different turn i haven't seen yet from the 3rd chapter on that is very refreshing. Grammar seems good to me. Maybe some weird sentences time to time but i'm not a native english so i could be just totally ignorant. Promising novel. I would just add that wuxia/eastern webnovel translated or original are legion on Webnovel. It will be very tough to find your place among them without having a very high release rate to get attention. Some very good wuxia webnovels have far fewer views compared to what they deserve.
Journey Of The Bright Immortal
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Thank you for your review. Unfortunately, I often can't get rid of the infodumps in my novels. I'm the type that likes to overexplain things. In this novel, the problem is that the MC has a lot of knowledge already instead of learning little by little. I feel that if I don't set the 'rules' of what he can or cannot do then he will be another OP MC that does everything without explanation. The MC already understands how things work but I want to explain to the reader since later on I won't feel the need to repeat everything and make sure they understand why the powers work that way.