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Uh... idk why I’m here. I wrote this review just like I went thru pre-school, selecting as many golden stars as possible. I’m not gnna read it, just gonna take the short cut to the short bus and let y’all know it’s an epic tale. I am depressed. Anyways, it’s a really good book, don’t rlly like the plot twist @ chapter 73, seems like a ripoff of 3 different anime’s I’ve watched. Has more filler than Naruto, just as Naruto used shadow clone, golden cactus used ctrl + V. I swear I saw the same action sequence 17 times by chapter 114. Down to the part where the main character hangs himself out of shame of participating in such a bad story. Don’t blame him, in fact I can relate, kinda feel like killing myself too. Idk if it’s his writing, crappy story telling, or the fact that I just lost my family to a mass cult suicide. I like stars. I’ll leave this review page with a starry sky so I at least leave a new star somewhere when I’m gone. It kinda feels like there is just a black hole in my chest tbh. The story was pretty good, plot could use some work I’ll leave a 5/5 in good faith.

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Neon's Will

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