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Although the first chapter is quite misleading in the sense that it makes it seem like not a good book, it gets better the more you read it. I would recommend the readers to give this book a chance. The plot is not typical. Author does have issues of mixing past and present tense but it's better the more you read as Author improves. I like this book and will keep it in my library ❤️

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Dandelion Lover - Taken Down

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Thank you for taking the time to write a review and all those comments! :) I do have some problems with the tenses, that I know, I mainly just write as it comes and then edit it, but the tenses always seem to pose a problem for me somehow. XD Once all the chapters are posted I will start with heavy editing and changes where there is simply not enough action. I am glad that you enjoyed it and have added it to your library.