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Ley
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2018-10-03 04:39

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Tangled journey in Harry Potter.

MordredIVV
4.3
26 Chs

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TioLu
TioLuLv4

when i read 'but with a much more complicated world that in the cannon', i dropped this novel without think.... some days later I ventured to read this novel... and was the best think than i did.... i recommended 1 thousand per cent.... this fanfic is awesome.... I already read many fanfics out there ... and this in my top ten!!!!

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Cocoa
CocoaLv15

I really like this story. You put a nice spin to the HP world. I hope you wont drop it. Will wait for the mext chapter :) . . . . . . . . . . Danm u 140 chara

6yr
JBrandt
JBrandtLv6

I truly love your story! I like what you did and can't wait for the next chapter! (Kidding... I can wait, it will just hurt inside) Keep up the great work :D

6yr
AmberPatriarch
AmberPatriarchLv14

Love this story probably one of my favorite fanfictions on this website the characters are memorable and the darker aspects are very entertaining to read. Thank you for writing this story

6yr
Daoistsvab
DaoistsvabLv5

Good harry potter fan-fic beter than the ones i read before i realy like this nover . the more i read the more i like it keep up the good work. and one more thing will the twins go to hogwards. ....and when is next uptate

6yr
Mercury
MercuryLv14

Reveal spoiler

6yr
Adearick
AdearickLv15

Good HP story .

6yr
Hetiii
HetiiiLv11

Holy **** dude. I can't even read this **** get a proofreader or at least use grammarly. ........ ........ . . . . .

6yr
DarkTezza
DarkTezzaLv12

Intersting premise, but just unreadable... please get a proofreader or use gramarly... and use proper "QUOTATION" marks for speach.. .................................................................................................,.,,. .............................................,gggggggggggggggggggggggggggvvgggggggggggggggggggggggggggvv gggggggggggggggggggggggggggvvgggggggggggggggggggggggggggvv

5yr
Nitrox2
Nitrox2Lv4

What can i say, first i'm not an english native-speaker (i'm french). I tried to read, really, but it's impossible to not cringe when there is not a single paragraph without grammatical error (it's like i'm reading MTL, no kidding). If i were you, i would rewrite from the start this story (when i lack inspiration for exemple). It will help you see your error and you will progress i believe. Good luck

5yr
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