To be honest, i really liked this novel, and i reached the 1200ish chapter. What bothers me about this fanfic is the Mc’s personality. First of all i have to say that, i love character development, but i also hate it, if it took too much time. My problem with the Mc is that after sooo much character development, he kinda revert back to “ not being so much developed” and kinda pathetic as if nothing happened at first place, over and over and over again. I get that he’s broken and all that, but this is too much. he’s over a century old and has a kid emotional level. He should at least be past this issue. Like there are alot of broken characters in the novel with situations worst then his, but they have much better development, when he is being cared for by soooooo many people. Anyway I couldn’t read more at the moment but atleast I enjoyed the story so far. And i may continue reading it later.
Einlion
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