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Haowie
HaowieLv136yr
2018-10-07 16:33

I've never been so drawn into a fanfiction as much as this one. I get goosebumps sometimes as i read the chapters fanboying out. Usually when writing these types of novels Authors like to Overpower their characters to the max, however unlike others of this genre Ichigo is different. He's op, but not broken to the point where he'll stomp every fight. His teamates also get their own time to shine, spotlight, and interesting dialogue. It's great you added male characters to his team don't listen to horny children. I also like the fact that Ichigo's character wasn't butchered; going off trying to woo every female in sight. Keep up the good work author! don't burn yourself out!

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CestMoi
CestMoiLv14

Im going to read this story because of this review. I almost didnt due to the abundance of mentally disabled horny childrens giving out 5 stars like some addict buying drugs. The fact that Ichigo would retain his character is the cherry on top. Im hoping this wouldnt be a dissapointment.

Shad
ShadLv6

ichigo didnt retain his character he becomes a gigolo who forget to bring his family from the collapsing world

Haowie
HaowieLv13

You're forgetting the fact that everyone died and his girls were the only ones that were safe in Hueco Mundo.

Shad:ichigo didnt retain his character he becomes a gigolo who forget to bring his family from the collapsing world
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