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_EMI_
_EMI_Lv43yr_EMI_

He was reborn as Neji and that was very interesting, but I don't like this M.C. as there could be thousands of possible scenarios where M.C didn't have to take the cage bird seal and become a slave to the main family. Sealing the byakugan during death is not all there is to the cage bird seal as it also limits it at all times. Not to mention that main family members can just make a hand sigh and control anyone with cage bird seal. This is just slavery. I don't know about you guys but I am not going to watch a slave M.C

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Rise of Hyuga Neji- a fan-fiction

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BloodyDaoist_
BloodyDaoist_Lv5BloodyDaoist_

Good thing you read it then

_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4_EMI_

Not anymore.

BloodyDaoist_:Good thing you read it then
Epaxx
EpaxxLv5Epaxx

This guy is just hating, good story though, he has plans about the cage bird seal. It's your loss btw.

swordzero
swordzeroLv6swordzero

And when the bird seal is undone or is useless to mc or will not affect the mc i will start reading it

Epaxx:This guy is just hating, good story though, he has plans about the cage bird seal. It's your loss btw.
NeoBee
NeoBeeLv6NeoBee

Then could you tell me about these 'THOUSAND OF POSSIBLE SCENARIOS?? He literally still a child, what could he do to change the hundreds years of tradition... And if neji refuse to be implanted with bird cage seal, grand elders will take that action as rebellion and will using force to implant it or they just directly kill neji... He take it because he can't escape from it, then you say that neji have 'THOUSANDS OF POSSIBLE SCENARIOS' where neji didn't have to take the seal.. so could you tell me at least 2 or 3 of those 'POSSIBLE SCENARIOS'???

NeoBee
NeoBeeLv6NeoBee

Bird cage seal didn't even effecting him... The seal didn't effect his potential, the seal didn't effect his strength, the seal didn't effect his growth... Why should he care... And the mc don't want to change the original story to much, if hyuuga clan suddenly remove he bird cage seal from the branch family it will create a huge change to the original story.. there is a chance that something that should happend later become earlier

swordzero:And when the bird seal is undone or is useless to mc or will not affect the mc i will start reading it
swordzero
swordzeroLv6swordzero

I don’t know maybe make the seall look like it’s on his forehead when it’s really not

NeoBee:Bird cage seal didn't even effecting him... The seal didn't effect his potential, the seal didn't effect his strength, the seal didn't effect his growth... Why should he care... And the mc don't want to change the original story to much, if hyuuga clan suddenly remove he bird cage seal from the branch family it will create a huge change to the original story.. there is a chance that something that should happend later become earlier
Giants323
Giants323Lv5Giants323

Either way its not really like being a slave, it is more of a hate symbol.

swordzero:I don’t know maybe make the seall look like it’s on his forehead when it’s really not
Kzar
KzarLv5Kzar

Lol ur comment had made me read this cauz of the strange situation

Daoist_Angel_Blue
Daoist_Angel_BlueLv5Daoist_Angel_Blue

I honestly don’t know how so many people treat this story like it’s actually some great piece of fiction... I really honestly am questioning the QI community for their love of beyond redeemable fanfics. There are some honestly good fanfics on QI, but most of the Naruto ones here are subpar.

_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4_EMI_

Dude.. That was just an example.! How about the fact that everything just seem to happen in a way that would convenience M.C without any explanation at all.!? C'mon... there's a limit to coincidences.! This is just too much. Example:- In the story, Hiashi doesn't suppress M.C with the seal. Then you would ask - what about other elders and main family members.!? Well, they simply don't exist in the story. That's right. The other clan elders and the main family other than Hiashi and family, simply don't exist in the story.

Giants323:Either way its not really like being a slave, it is more of a hate symbol.
Daoist_Angel_Blue
Daoist_Angel_BlueLv5Daoist_Angel_Blue

Totally agree with you man. I made a review about the story after reading some of the other ‘reviews’ on this story. It honestly makes me question their validity, cause who in their right minds would call this story the best Naruto fanfic they have every read. Or even claim that the character seem realistic and the story follows nicely... have they ever picked up a real book before... god this review section on this story makes me question so many things.

_EMI_:Dude.. That was just an example.! How about the fact that everything just seem to happen in a way that would convenience M.C without any explanation at all.!? C'mon... there's a limit to coincidences.! This is just too much. Example:- In the story, Hiashi doesn't suppress M.C with the seal. Then you would ask - what about other elders and main family members.!? Well, they simply don't exist in the story. That's right. The other clan elders and the main family other than Hiashi and family, simply don't exist in the story.
patienceLove
patienceLoveLv5patienceLove

love you lol

NeoBee:Then could you tell me about these 'THOUSAND OF POSSIBLE SCENARIOS?? He literally still a child, what could he do to change the hundreds years of tradition... And if neji refuse to be implanted with bird cage seal, grand elders will take that action as rebellion and will using force to implant it or they just directly kill neji... He take it because he can't escape from it, then you say that neji have 'THOUSANDS OF POSSIBLE SCENARIOS' where neji didn't have to take the seal.. so could you tell me at least 2 or 3 of those 'POSSIBLE SCENARIOS'???
Juto
JutoLv6Juto

It is part of the story plot line. Like all stories they have there ups and downs.

Tomcen
TomcenLv4Tomcen

Dude he is in a child body what would you expect rebel.

_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4_EMI_

I just felt that the author could do a lot of things here. Like, run away from konoha and grow up by being on the run. It could be a nice adventure. Or there could be some plot armor. M.C could even stumble upon the key to the cage bird seal in some ancient shrine, free all the branch members and kill off the group of disgusting elders. Yet, he chose to be a slave.

Tomcen:Dude he is in a child body what would you expect rebel.
matt1234
matt1234Lv4matt1234

Run away grow stronger and fight unlike this dumb **** waiting for them to change there mind he shouldn’t let them do it anyway and even if he has plans for the Sealing jutsu still is acting like a slave because he’s getting cursed and he’s worried about Hinata **** that

NeoBee:Then could you tell me about these 'THOUSAND OF POSSIBLE SCENARIOS?? He literally still a child, what could he do to change the hundreds years of tradition... And if neji refuse to be implanted with bird cage seal, grand elders will take that action as rebellion and will using force to implant it or they just directly kill neji... He take it because he can't escape from it, then you say that neji have 'THOUSANDS OF POSSIBLE SCENARIOS' where neji didn't have to take the seal.. so could you tell me at least 2 or 3 of those 'POSSIBLE SCENARIOS'???
NeoBee
NeoBeeLv6NeoBee

He is weak, there's nothing he can do with his current strength, even if he escaped from the village he will be branded as a rouge ninja and hunted down because his Byakugan, especially Kumo who really want to steal Byakugan that badly

matt1234:Run away grow stronger and fight unlike this dumb **** waiting for them to change there mind he shouldn’t let them do it anyway and even if he has plans for the Sealing jutsu still is acting like a slave because he’s getting cursed and he’s worried about Hinata **** that
Saberswordguy
SaberswordguyLv5Saberswordguy

Pretty dumb sh*t there when you could just easily build a foundation in a village you have a lot of knowledge on pretty childish to run when it doesn't effect much just to have the seal also mc will obviously get the ****ty seal off any way so bunch of crap your spouting what ever these people want a mc who seriously just ran away because of a seal that dont effect the future and if he ran away that would cause a ripple and even if it might be small I doubt it would though I seriously think no know you are just trying to make up nonsense just to prove your point "sigh * well that's all I have to say it's okay it you state your honest opinion bro but please at the very least make it make sense. "I'm out dang seriously I wished I hadn't seen this comment section I wrote all this so might as well post it"

_EMI_:I just felt that the author could do a lot of things here. Like, run away from konoha and grow up by being on the run. It could be a nice adventure. Or there could be some plot armor. M.C could even stumble upon the key to the cage bird seal in some ancient shrine, free all the branch members and kill off the group of disgusting elders. Yet, he chose to be a slave.
Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5Seikatsu

No one cares about some random "Plans" that may or may not be implemented before this was dropped. Reading 10 chapters about a slave mc? Nty

Epaxx:This guy is just hating, good story though, he has plans about the cage bird seal. It's your loss btw.