Review Detail of DimondGold in ApocalypseNow¡¡

Item: ApocalypseNow¡¡
Rating: 3.2

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DimondGoldLv55yrDimondGold

Seems interesting but main character is sometimes call he and other times she making it very confusing about the main characters gender. The story has potential but grammar is low quality and many sentences are repetitive

ApocalypseNow¡¡

Vikingbaldo

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VikingbaldoAuthorVikingbaldo

yes friend, we are editing the chaps, I publish them without editing and then with another friend I am editing them, sometimes they confuse it, they take it as a woman because it is called shen, so she self-corrects it as she

5yr

VikingbaldoAuthorVikingbaldo

It's my first novel, thank you for your comment

5yr