The story is serious but at the same time makes you laugh because of the miss understandings. It has potential, would like to know power levels/ stages if any and more of the world structure/map
Thanks for the review! Thought that it might be a little overwhelming to throw in all that information from the start, so was thinking of slowly introducing other elements of the world as it progresses. But from what you said, it looks like I might have been going too slow then..