I think the plot is good. Just that too much of details on the system updating & option on how to proceed the next step. Not all readers would like to read so much details about how the system run rather than read more of the plot & story development. Overall is a good read.
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LIKEThanks for the rating! They are pertinent criticisms, but I will not focus so much on the system, unfortunately this week I do not have time to publish the chapters on a regular basis. I think the system will launch its missions in one or two chapters, soon after the following chapters have developed on top of these missions. So it will not really have so many system procedures. Xoxo
Hi, thanks for the reply. Oh It's a pity you will be busy from now onwards. No worries, good thing must wait. Will wait for your update patiently. Cheers!